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Enjoy life for the moment,

March 1st, 2009 by Ethan

I try enjoying life for the moment,

But it’s too hard,

I think about it,

But it’s more painful to think than to do, so I do without thinking,

Moment gone.

Posted in List Poem #1 |

3 Responses

  1. Stuart Ross Says:

    This poem is really short and packs a punch. I suggest breaking that second-last line up into two or even three separate lines. Slowing the poem that way will give that last line more power.

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