Enjoy life for the moment,
Ethan
I try enjoying life for the moment,
But it’s too hard,
I think about it,
But it’s more painful to think than to do, so I do without thinking,
Moment gone.
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Ethan
I try enjoying life for the moment,
But it’s too hard,
I think about it,
But it’s more painful to think than to do, so I do without thinking,
Moment gone.
Posted in List Poem #1 |
March 9th, 2009 at 6:14 pm
This poem is really short and packs a punch. I suggest breaking that second-last line up into two or even three separate lines. Slowing the poem that way will give that last line more power.
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