I Am…
Ricki_Arianna
- I Wonder Why I Talk Too Much.
- I Hear Music
- I see Jasper Hale
- I want to go to the Warped Tour In Vancouver
- I Am A good Friend And I’m Me
- I Pretend to Play Guitar
- I feel Confused a lot
- I Touch People’s Hearts
- I Cry For my grandpa
- I Am A Good Friend, I Am Me
- I Understand the Meaning Of Life
- I Say “You’re A Dorko
! - I Dream About Things!!
- I Try To Be The Best person I Can Be
- I Hope To Go To A Huge Concert
- I Am A Good Friend.. And I Am Me!
Posted in List Poem #1 |
March 9th, 2009 at 6:21 pm
You’ve got a great start here, Ricki. There are a lot of sincere feelings here and a lot of slightly whacky thoughts mixed in. I think that’s a good thing.
I suggest playing around with the order of the lines a bit, and seeing if you can put a few more surprises in.