Comments for POETRY ROCKS eZine http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca your Writing eZine - a place to publish your Connected Classrooms poems Sat, 13 Mar 2010 01:21:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 Comment on Enjoy life for the moment, by alycysadas http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/03/01/enjoy-life-for-the-moment/comment-page-1/#comment-10 alycysadas Fri, 25 Sep 2009 16:39:25 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=153#comment-10 <strong>alycysadas...</strong> <a href="http://awugesoba.blogspot.com/2009/09/truyen-doc-audio-vietnamese.html" rel="nofollow">top hairstyles of 2008</a> ... alycysadas…

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]]> Comment on I Am… by Stuart Ross http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/03/01/i-am/comment-page-1/#comment-8 Stuart Ross Tue, 10 Mar 2009 02:21:58 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=202#comment-8 You've got a great start here, Ricki. There are a lot of sincere feelings here and a lot of slightly whacky thoughts mixed in. I think that's a good thing. I suggest playing around with the order of the lines a bit, and seeing if you can put a few more surprises in. You’ve got a great start here, Ricki. There are a lot of sincere feelings here and a lot of slightly whacky thoughts mixed in. I think that’s a good thing.

I suggest playing around with the order of the lines a bit, and seeing if you can put a few more surprises in.

]]> Comment on Mastermind by Stuart Ross http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/03/01/mastermind/comment-page-1/#comment-7 Stuart Ross Tue, 10 Mar 2009 02:20:17 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=170#comment-7 I like what's going on here, Ethan, and I think this poem should keep going and see where it takes you (and where you take it). I like what’s going on here, Ethan, and I think this poem should keep going and see where it takes you (and where you take it).

]]> Comment on Colours of My Sky by Stuart Ross http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/02/26/colours-of-my-sky/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Stuart Ross Tue, 10 Mar 2009 02:19:19 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=177#comment-6 This is a great poem, Sadye! Very vivid images. And your verbs are really rich: "smeared," "caked," "stretches," "grazes." Well-done! This is a great poem, Sadye! Very vivid images. And your verbs are really rich: “smeared,” “caked,” “stretches,” “grazes.” Well-done!

]]> Comment on Fishing Trip - by Kate/Evan/Ben by Stuart Ross http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/02/26/fishing-trip-by-kateevanben/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Stuart Ross Tue, 10 Mar 2009 02:18:03 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=181#comment-5 OK, I dunno about that last line ... but I do like this poem. I like how crazy it starts getting when the questions kick in. And I like the idea of a misty river that used to be an auto dump. It gives me hope! OK, I dunno about that last line … but I do like this poem. I like how crazy it starts getting when the questions kick in. And I like the idea of a misty river that used to be an auto dump. It gives me hope!

]]> Comment on The Sky is Falling by Stuart Ross http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/02/26/the-sky-is-falling/comment-page-1/#comment-4 Stuart Ross Tue, 10 Mar 2009 02:16:11 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=175#comment-4 I can't tell whether this is goofy-funny or deeply philosophical. I think it's both. I can’t tell whether this is goofy-funny or deeply philosophical.

I think it’s both.

]]> Comment on Enjoy life for the moment, by Stuart Ross http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/03/01/enjoy-life-for-the-moment/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Stuart Ross Tue, 10 Mar 2009 02:14:18 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=153#comment-3 This poem is really short and packs a punch. I suggest breaking that second-last line up into two or even three separate lines. Slowing the poem that way will give that last line more power. This poem is really short and packs a punch. I suggest breaking that second-last line up into two or even three separate lines. Slowing the poem that way will give that last line more power.

]]> Comment on collaborative by maddy and ashley by Stuart Ross http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/03/01/collaborative-by-maddy-and-ashley-2/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Stuart Ross Tue, 10 Mar 2009 02:12:42 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=136#comment-2 Wow, there are some great things going on in this collaboration! It's amazing how the most perfect two lines can sometimes come together by chance. Well done! Wow, there are some great things going on in this collaboration! It’s amazing how the most perfect two lines can sometimes come together by chance. Well done!

]]> Comment on Untitled by Ricki_Arianna http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/index.php/2009/02/25/untitled-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1 Ricki_Arianna Thu, 26 Feb 2009 18:54:40 +0000 http://www.ezine.bcelearner.ca/?p=86#comment-1 DUDE!! I REMEMBER YOU!! YOU ARE THE GUY FROM POETRY ROCKS THAT HAS THE HERO COOKIES!!! YOU ROCK!! AND YOUR POEMS ARE AWESOME!! DUDE!! I REMEMBER YOU!! YOU ARE THE GUY FROM POETRY ROCKS THAT HAS THE HERO COOKIES!!! YOU ROCK!! AND YOUR POEMS ARE AWESOME!!

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